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Submitted: May 17, 2008
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YES, it is finally up! I spent muuuuuch more time on this page, it looks like a completely different comic. Ha ha, I swear it's only because it is a serious moment. We will look stupid again very soon.

As much as I was complaining about backgrounds I forced myself to sit and do a decent job on them (using Painter instead of Photoshop helped A LOT), and I think they look pretty darn nice. If I can muster up the energy to do all the backgrounds like this or better, then I won't need anyone to do them for me in the future. There should be like, two times as many trees but once I noticed it was 3 in the morning I was pretty done with painting trees.
Also, the actual drawings are a lot more constructed and I was paying a little more attention to colors. This page is really significant because I find myself changing things about the characters designs as I go, so now I need to go back and change things about the other pages to make them match.
Line art is thinner, a much better look.
The text. It's still the same font (Comic Sans) but I dropped the caps lock look. I am trying to find a better text that isn't so ugly, but I am not sure where to look. Any sites you can recommend?

AH, oh and the most significant thing is that I changed the name of the comic to "Genesis Saga" (ooo scifi-y) instead of the other name (which held no meaning, unlike "Genesis Saga").

So yeah, I have the next couple pages planned out, and you will know who the emo white critter is soon enough. Once I reveal him I will most likely make an updated character sheet for him. For those of you that know already from past drawings of him, I changed his design a LOT (omg now he has fur and cat-paws), so I am excited to draw him older now. That reminds me, I am still trying to make them look like adolescents, it is a lot harder then it looks. 8(

I am just really excited because in the 5 hours it took me to make this I was thinking of all sorts of story goodies for the future. 83 Yay


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Luls at Airu all, hey i'll take you to the place where you can kill yourself (-peers over- bai! -waves-)
Typo: along=alone?

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Nokami said, "My name is Nokami, and as a dragon, I represent Mai as her original character and internet alias. You can see me by clicking my reference link at the bottom of my recent journal."
airu is so cute :)

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This is MANLY romance!!!
Yeah, Airu is an insensitive and clueless moron :B

OH SHI- thanks XD *fixes*

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FAQ

'There are two things in this world I hate: people and dealing with them.'

~Airu
<3 she is dumb

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FAQ

'There are two things in this world I hate: people and dealing with them.'

~Airu
Ariu doesn't quite have the caring bed side manner hehe but at least he can get some food if the fellow decides to jump from the cliff :3

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We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best we can find in our travels is a friend.
Robert Louis Stevenson
i honestly hate online 'animal' comics, but this one is starting to grow to me. i like the detailed backgrounds and the flat colouring on the characters.. kind of striking, it pops out a bit more. the story is interesting too.. can't wait to see more :D
awww. your both so cute/awesome. and your supporting him in trying to kill himself!? XD

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there is no joy in life and no life in joy... i dont even know if that made sence im just really pissed off right now.
lmao. 'I know where you can kill yourself! I'll take you there, watch you die, then I can eat moar bugz without tripping on you anymore!!!!'

...but seeing how cluless Airu is she'll still manage to trip on his carcass....?

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Aw, poor guy. I love how Airu is so enthusiastic to show him the bluffs, lol. "You can throw yourself to your death from here! It'll be fun! 8DDD"

I am diggin' the backgrounds as well. =)

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I like the 4th and 5th panels a lot--good timing and emotion throughout the comic!

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At his age he could rub up against a tree and get a hard-on.

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